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Green pushes aside
Comforting earth, behold sun......
Possibility
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This pleases me-I've felt I've been perhaps too literal in always using the word prompt-did I get it right-I was trying to get the image without using the word. You guys tell me.
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You bet you got it right Deb. This is great. I can feel that sun and see the earth responding.
I get the sense of the inevitability of the possibility - like it's just about to spring... phew!
If not today, then surely soon.
for a writer i should know more about this form of poetry, but i don't.
all i can say is i like this.
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Debra, I just experienced that this afternoon as I was on the back porch bathing the dogs.
We have green grass starting to grow!
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We are not there yet, but I understand the feeling. You got it right.
Ah, imagine the potential! This is beautiful!
Yes, fraught with possibilities! i like it!
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