Sunday, February 21, 2010

Haiku Bones-Fraught

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Green pushes aside
Comforting earth, behold sun......
Possibility

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This pleases me-I've felt I've been perhaps too literal in always using the word prompt-did I get it right-I was trying to get the image without using the word.  You guys tell me.

8 comments:

Lisa at Greenbow said...

You bet you got it right Deb. This is great. I can feel that sun and see the earth responding.

Andy Sewina said...

I get the sense of the inevitability of the possibility - like it's just about to spring... phew!

Stan Ski said...

If not today, then surely soon.

kj said...

for a writer i should know more about this form of poetry, but i don't.

all i can say is i like this.

Jim said...

Debra, I just experienced that this afternoon as I was on the back porch bathing the dogs.
We have green grass starting to grow!
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fourwindshaiga said...

We are not there yet, but I understand the feeling. You got it right.

Tumblewords: said...

Ah, imagine the potential! This is beautiful!

rdl said...

Yes, fraught with possibilities! i like it!