Sunday, February 7, 2010

Haiku Bones-breath

Resting Silently
In the space between two breaths
Is eternity




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13 comments:

Lisa at Greenbow said...

A good haiku Deb. Lovely photo with it. I hope you are feeling good now too.

studio lolo said...

Something tells me I've been here with you ;)

Great haiku. You're really good with those, but then again I think you're good with words.

How's the butt and other problems?
Is it warming up in OK at all?


Word veri=nestl :)

Mim said...

wow deb - very good! agree with lo, you are good with words and yes...how is your butt and the pups and the snow???

Marion said...

Really good! Of course, I love the photo of the Ocean, my favourite place, as well. I hope you are feeling better and are able to get out.

Teri C said...

This is just awesome Deb!!! WOW

kj said...

gee, have i been here too? :)

you use words so effectively...


i can't ask you how your butt is but i do hope your spirit is feisty and full. :)

i sent you an email. did you get it?

rdl said...

Good one!!

Debra Kay said...

I have moments of fiesty, and moments of not agony.

What I miss the most, and I'm trying not to complain, but I do miss it so I think it's ok to say it-is being able just to walk into the kitchen for a drink of water, or go to the bathroom. Right now every thing has to be planned around when my back is not in spasm.

I can predict somewhat from my last does of ibuprofen-but I have to have a list of what I want to accomplish with each pill-and start with the most impotant items first in case I can't finish.

Right now we are talkiing tasks like:
Feed dogs. Fill water bottle. Go to bathroom (me).

Eating is a fill in activity if I get the list done and if my stomach allows.

Yesterday was a great day_ i ate three small meals. Today it's 6:30 and I've managed a handful of peanuts and a few pork rinds.

Yet, I am getting better, and I am determined not to complain, because I AM getting better.

therer2doors said...

oh, beautiful haiku!
I love your photo, too.

Tumblewords: said...

This is lovely! The photo and the haiku speak together.

Barbara/myth maker said...

Lovely haiku, and photo.

Snowbrush said...

I enjoyed both the poem and the photo.

Jim said...

Nice haiku, Debra. I hadn't thought of this before, but now it seems scary thinking about that space.
I have stopped breathing for no apparant reason. That is very scary too. It is a little hard to get started again.
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