Debra, this is so inviting. I am ready to get out the golf clubs because with green grass I can find my ball. .. I am sorry I didn't make to your haiku in return last week. I was 'snowed under' with stuff. I liked the spaces you found to be electrifying, the 'space between us' and 'between our finger tips.' That made the tie between the two pretty close ..
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Wonderful haiku Debra!
I am doing all my ABCs in haiku. Love doing them. I need to go over and look at Haiku Bones.
I love your new look also.
Love the imagery you use. I love the second line. You could make a new haiku out of it.
Melanie
Oh, I like this! I'm looking forward to some trembling green! Nice visual.
Everyone around here is impatiently awaiting the trembling green. Wonderful haiku Deb.
Debra, this is so inviting. I am ready to get out the golf clubs because with green grass I can find my ball.
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I am sorry I didn't make to your haiku in return last week. I was 'snowed under' with stuff.
I liked the spaces you found to be electrifying, the 'space between us' and 'between our finger tips.'
That made the tie between the two pretty close
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i can see that beautiful slice of green against the white so vividly. well done.
I've never tried haiku. I wonder if I'd be capable of it! You and Teri make it look so easy.
I did show up at the poetry slam tonight though ;)
shivery feel to this, i tried a haiku for cm today. see if it is right.
We are a long ways from green, but I did send an order for seeds today!
Wasn't it just really cold there?
Love your first line of your poem.
and so it was spring - just like that!
Yes, the first greens almost tremble as they fight their way through winter's elements. Nicely done!
Phew, I love the optimism in this piece, from where I'm sitting it still looks like winter out there!
Love the way the green springs up from beneath the snow - trembling.
I like the image/the trembling greens of the upcoming spring
wonderful!
Oh how beautiful and hopeful! Thank you for joining in the fun at Haiku Bones.
powerful and beautiful picture!
what a unique rendition of the word trembling...
loved the positive vibes about it...
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