Sunday, January 3, 2010

Haiku Bones-Electrifying





The space between us
Is not empty, it pulses
Electrifying

Static burst of fire
Leaps between our finger tips
Electrifying






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13 comments:

Lisa at Greenbow said...

Excellent Haikus. They are very exciting.

zoya gautam said...

u enlist - peace on earth _ as one of ur interests -

i find that electrifying ..

thank u for ur soft expressions ..

Lynn said...

That sounds exciting and titilating too. Lucky you!

Tumblewords: said...

Excellent! These bring back a memory or two.

studio lolo said...

ooh la la!!!!!

rdl said...

nice haikus, i like the first one best.

Nancy Bea Miller said...

Very electric! As a kid I remember rubbing my feet on carpet to get the finger snap shock with my brothers and friends...although you may have meant this in a more adult way. ;-)

fourwindshaiga said...

Oh, that kind of electric!
Works for me.


I have family in Norman, Enid, and Tahlequah.

Robin said...

Wow! Very original ideas, and really well expressed. I especially love the first one.

Stan Ski said...

Great turn-on!

Jeeves said...

Electrifying and exciting

tasmith1122 said...

Love the first haiku especially. Really love the name of your blog! ;) Thank you for these.

Yousei Hime

Artist Victoria O'Neill said...

lately everything i touch i get a shock off of it.....not sure why but these haikus say it all