Sunday, January 10, 2010

Haiku Bones-Trembling

This week's prompt for Haiku Bones was:  trembling.

Green rises trembling
From beneath silent snow tomb
Winter is vanquished

15 comments:

Teri C said...

Wonderful haiku Debra!
I am doing all my ABCs in haiku. Love doing them. I need to go over and look at Haiku Bones.

I love your new look also.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Love the imagery you use. I love the second line. You could make a new haiku out of it.



Melanie

Tumblewords: said...

Oh, I like this! I'm looking forward to some trembling green! Nice visual.

Lisa at Greenbow said...

Everyone around here is impatiently awaiting the trembling green. Wonderful haiku Deb.

Jim said...

Debra, this is so inviting. I am ready to get out the golf clubs because with green grass I can find my ball.
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I am sorry I didn't make to your haiku in return last week. I was 'snowed under' with stuff.
I liked the spaces you found to be electrifying, the 'space between us' and 'between our finger tips.'
That made the tie between the two pretty close
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Artist Victoria O'Neill said...

i can see that beautiful slice of green against the white so vividly. well done.

studio lolo said...

I've never tried haiku. I wonder if I'd be capable of it! You and Teri make it look so easy.

I did show up at the poetry slam tonight though ;)

soulbrush said...

shivery feel to this, i tried a haiku for cm today. see if it is right.

sandy, from fourwinds said...

We are a long ways from green, but I did send an order for seeds today!

Wasn't it just really cold there?

Love your first line of your poem.

Stan Ski said...

and so it was spring - just like that!

Robin said...

Yes, the first greens almost tremble as they fight their way through winter's elements. Nicely done!

Wendy Naisa said...

Phew, I love the optimism in this piece, from where I'm sitting it still looks like winter out there!

Love the way the green springs up from beneath the snow - trembling.

lissa said...

I like the image/the trembling greens of the upcoming spring

wonderful!

Nancy Bea Miller said...

Oh how beautiful and hopeful! Thank you for joining in the fun at Haiku Bones.

human being said...

powerful and beautiful picture!

what a unique rendition of the word trembling...
loved the positive vibes about it...