I like your use of rhyme in the last line.
the last line evokes the insomnia. Here be mine.
tick tocki think you rockwanna playone april day?
I think there is a whole lot of people that can relate to this haiku Deb. Very good. I have been listening to that clock tick tock a lot lately too. It must be spring working on us.
i too feel restless in bed, hurry on summer...
wow - we've all been there -
I know the contours of insomnia all too well...My Bones
Works for me!transient
And three, and four - 05.30 right now!
I feel so sick after a night of restlessness.I've been sleeping like a baby lately...sorry :)Have you ever tried Quietude? It's homeopathic and has no side effects or drug interactions at all. Brian and I take it every night. You can get it through Amazon if you can't find it at a health food store or pharmacy. Whole Foods carries it too.
the only thing worse that 2 o'clock is 3. good one!
i can so relate to that!!!
Ah, I haven't slept all that much since my last comment!2.a.m.
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