Sunday, March 28, 2010

Haiku Bones-Two O'Clock

My insomnia
Seconds drag by so slowly
Tick tock two o'clock

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13 comments:

SOL said...

I like your use of rhyme in the last line.

John's comments said...

the last line evokes the insomnia. Here be mine.

kj said...

tick tock
i think you rock
wanna play
one april day?

Lisa at Greenbow said...

I think there is a whole lot of people that can relate to this haiku Deb. Very good. I have been listening to that clock tick tock a lot lately too. It must be spring working on us.

soulbrush said...

i too feel restless in bed, hurry on summer...

Mim said...

wow - we've all been there -

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I know the contours of insomnia all too well...

My Bones

gautami tripathy said...

Works for me!

transient

Stan Ski said...

And three, and four - 05.30 right now!

studio lolo said...

I feel so sick after a night of restlessness.I've been sleeping like a baby lately...sorry :)

Have you ever tried Quietude? It's homeopathic and has no side effects or drug interactions at all. Brian and I take it every night. You can get it through Amazon if you can't find it at a health food store or pharmacy. Whole Foods carries it too.

rdl said...

the only thing worse that 2 o'clock is 3.
good one!

pieceofpie said...

i can so relate to that!!!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Ah, I haven't slept all that much since my last comment!

2.a.m.